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Writer's Model
 Autobiographical Incident
 
     
An autobiographical incident tells the story of an experience that took place in the writer's life. It includes details about the incident as well as the author's thoughts and feelings about what happened.
 
Many autobiographical incidents use the structure illustrated in the framework below. Print this framework and use it as a guide when you write your own autobiographical incident.
   
 
    Introduction
• Attention-grabbing opening
• Background information
Grab your readers' attention Ask a question, use a surprising statement, or put your readers in the middle of a dramatic situation.
Build background Set the scene for your readers by telling them about the people and places involved in the incident.
 
 
    Body
• Beginning of incident (action details and sensory details)
• Middle of incident (action details and sensory details)

• End of incident (action details and sensory details)
Write the events in chronological order Describe the events in your narrative in the order in which they happened.
Work in the details Elaborate on each event by writing about exactly what occurred and what people said. Also include details that appeal to the senses. Sensory details can help bring your story to life.
 
 
    Conclusion
• Reason this incident is important to you
Write about the meaning of the incident Let your readers know how the experience affected you. Show what you learned or how you changed as a result, and tell why those changes were important.  
 
   
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