Elements of Language: Fifth Course, Chapter 2

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Writer's Model

Extended Definition

Some words, like freedomand hope,have so many meanings and associations that they require an extended definition to explain them. An extended definition expands and refines a standard dictionary definition and sometimes explores the personal meaning a word has for the writer.

Many extended definitions use the structure illustrated in the framework below. Print this framework and use it as a guide when you write your own extended definition.

Introduction
• Use an attention grabber.
• Supply necessary background information, including your subject's larger category.
• Provide a clear thesis.

Get your readers' attention Use an arresting example or a striking contrast.
Build background Provide background information and mention the common dictionary definition of the term.
Get to the point State your thesis, showing how your definition extends the common one and indicating how your essay will progress.

Body
• Discuss the first example, illustration, anecdote, or analogy.
• Discuss the second example, and so on.

Offer some support Provide examples that bolster your thesis.
Organize your ideas Arrange those examples in an order that makes sense, such as chronological order or order of importance.

Conclusion
• Summarize the definition.
• Briefly explain the importance or relevance of the extended definition.

Sum it up Quickly remind your readers of your extended definition, and highlight the ways in which your definition is different from the common definition.
Provide your opinion Leave readers with a clear statement of your ideas about the definition's importance.