Elements of Language: Fourth Course, Chapter 4

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Writer's Model

Problem-Analysis Essay

As the name implies, a writer writes a problem-analysis essay to analyze a complex problem by examining contributing factors. This type of essay helps to create an increased awareness of the problem and possibly motivates its readers to find solutions.

Many problem-analysis essays use the structure illustrated in the framework below. Print this framework and use it as a guide when you write your own problem-analysis essay.

Introduction
• Catch your audience's attention.
• State the problem in your thesis.

Start with something interesting Begin your essay with a thought-provoking question or an anecdote to which your readers can easily relate.
Make yourself clear Clearly and concisely state your topic and main idea, alerting your readers to the seriousness of the problem. Your thesis should relate directly to the key points that follow.

Body
• State the key points in your analysis of the problem.
• Provide support for your key points.
• Organize ideas in a way that makes sense.

Close to home Maintain your readers' interest by pointing out several ways in which the problem affects them.
Do not confuse the issue To help readers follow your thoughts, make sure your key points follow a logical progression. Support each key point with facts, statistics, and examples.

Conclusion
• Restate your thesis.
• Emphasize the seriousness of the problem and its importance to your audience.

Repeat yourself Rather than copying your thesis statement verbatim, restate it. Word it so that readers are again reminded of how the problem affects them.